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Nikolay Stanev Stanev itibaren Calhoun, KS, Birleşik Devletler itibaren Calhoun, KS, Birleşik Devletler

Okuyucu Nikolay Stanev Stanev itibaren Calhoun, KS, Birleşik Devletler

Nikolay Stanev Stanev itibaren Calhoun, KS, Birleşik Devletler

lioko83

Hmmmmmmm.......The idea might be great. The writing is decent enough. The problem is just one --> It really needs editing. Really really need it. 1. I think the book is too long 2. I sense a discontinuity between chapters. Each chapter in this book actually retell some major events but the current event seems like it has no connection with the previous chapter. 3. I don't get why everyone, event the parents and friends, is so interested in the main characters' love lives. It's like no one can't stop commenting on it. The author put too much focus on the main characters' love story. Really...that's pretty much the focus. But if the point of interest is very slow in development you will hear the same story again and again. "... He's so handsome.. I like him as a friend...I don't think he likes me...I don't want to destroy our friedship". Each chapter is always like that. 4. Too many added characters but no depth. The characters, even the main characters, are not well fleshed out.